Water is not always limpid

Question

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Answer 1

A Suggestion (with rhymes)

 

Water is not always limpid,

and mere words can sound insipid;

like the cotton, sometimes milky -

the heart's flows run seldom silky.

 

When the sky appears bright and blue,

your soul errs further, without clue;

often, ways go steep and winding,

while most steps crave for a finding.

 

Apologies - in words or mails,

can turn into uneasy nails;

sincere intentions heal or fail,

for water falls as rain or hail.

 

Stress and speed are bad for health,

gambling depletes the inner wealth;

extremes do not know how to stop,

if there's no wisdom on the top.

 

M.

Comments

good

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@Suyanto Tirta

Did you read all the rhymes (see below)? They are inspiring and cheerful.

Answer 2

           A Limerick Solution

Though the water is often not limpid,

The solution is really quite simp, kid:

When run through a filter,

'Tis THEN  back in kilter,

With nary a fleck to be glimpséd.

Comments

Lol - .

Rio's waters, for instance, would need a thorough filtering ...

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Lol, yes, the swimmers were warned not to put their heads underwater. 

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Unhappy "lol". Yes indeed :

http://www.dailymail.co.uk/news/article-3734899/Belgian-sailor-reports-illness-racing-polluted-bay.html

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I read that the bacterial pollution levels in the bay are over one million times greater than what is considered safe.

And they over-chlorinated the pools to keep them from turning green.

Maybe they should have ordered 10 million liter-bottles of Perrier to fill them with. 

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Yes, indeed - it is saddening ...

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